Open both in their own window and click back and forth.
Like I said, the original was good on its own. I only made slight adjustments. In my opinion, your corrections opened up the shadows to a almost non natural look. Kinda like trying to add light from the opposite side.
Having said that, you are the artist and what you like counts. Everyone else is the critic.
Again, my goal was just to show a different perspective. I actually like the original, That bias probably shows in my approach.